Everyday pictures

[Jofx]

I will start off with a gigantic upload. criti as much as possible, but i would like to know how to get better not only what im doing wrong : P

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[purplerose]

Nice tones in #2.

#10 is friggin' creepy... O_O


keep playing around with your compositions and DOF like you have here, you're doing great.

[Jofx]

Thank you again purplerose.

playing around
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[carolupus]

I really like no 8 - it has a very melancholic feeling to it. I'd cut the log in the left corner though.

[Jofx]

carolupus :
Thanks, i think i should have moved the hole view so the log wasent trying to make aborderthingy with the photoframe. cuting it would make an odd size to the photo and alsp putting to many elements in one confined space. guess the best thing to do would be to fiks it up in PS.

Thanks for the comment! i dint even see the log untill you pointed it out (: a really helpful comment

[pernille]

I like Isak the purple man.
Also I really like the light in number 14 and thefact that Julius isn't really there

[Jofx]

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walking around Oslo... cold

[purplerose]

I really like the tones and exposure in that one.

Did you try playing around with cropping on it?

[Jofx]

Thanks!
no, because the corner of the building is in a nice position (golden rule or whatever) and the dark at the bottom is balancing everything, holding everything down.
What would you have cropped on it?

[Jofx]

I used the 3D glasses that are awesome. you know, the red and blue ones.
-modified the red side so that i could put it on the lens.
so no manips fosho'
feedback?

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[pernille]

ha. i did that once, but i didnt to anything to the glasses i just held them in front of the lens. twas fun and scary.
i like these. i like beckett.

[darkchild]

#11 on your first post is a very beautiful capture!

[Iddi]

I agree, #11 is really cool. it's got a kind of abstract, apocalyptic feeling to it

[Jofx]

Nice! thank you all

[rhajastan]

I agree with the last two posts (not including yours), no. 11 is great, i love the different colours in the sky. also like no. 13 just coz of the warm tone.

[Jofx]

Thanks Rhajastan! nice feedback (:



Adding my pictures from the portrait thread.
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[Jofx]

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strange perspective and comp' but i like it anyway

[Gentile]

I really like the last one. It's so full of color and life.

[Jofx]

Thank you Gentile_
actually it is the grayest day i have even been out in a long time. Photoshop does miracles:P

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Borrowing a lens from a friend that he got for 4kr (less than one dollar)

[Nike]

Your portraits have a very warm, natural feel, I really like that In some of them, the noise is a bit strong (18, 19, 27 for example). In the last one, too, but here, for some reason, I think it adds to the photo, together with the soft focus, mood and composition - I like this one.

I've got to get my hands on 3d glasses, too, that looks like a lot of fun

[Jofx]

Long time. havent used the camera much lately

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[purplerose]

There's something about #33 that I really like. Maybe make the shadows a bit darker to push the mood more?

[Jofx]

Originally Posted by purplerose

There's something about #33 that I really like. Maybe make the shadows a bit darker to push the mood more?

i tried doing that but it takes away the nessesery details in the shadows. it would become to simple of a picture: the shadows would just become big blobs of black... at least thats how it would look on my screen

[Jofx]

Its now summer

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[Jofx]

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[purplerose]

Nice work in #38. Maybe try to work on the contrast more?

[Jofx]

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[Crash]

Some really great pics in this thread.

I really love #6